BEASTY
The Creator
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 |  Subject: ~Item List~ Tue Apr 26, 2011 9:21 pm | |
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jork
He Who Wants it Brung
Posts : 2161
| | Subject: Re: ~Item List~ Tue Apr 26, 2011 10:52 pm | |
| Nice work on the stuff description  | |
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digit
Add mint
Posts : 2594
| | Subject: Re: ~Item List~ Tue Apr 26, 2011 11:00 pm | |
| Yeah, very good. I would've been lazy and just posted pics of the description  | |
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2D4
Critique Extraordinaire
Posts : 3451
| | Subject: Re: ~Item List~ Wed Apr 27, 2011 2:06 am | |
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Noobface
Extreme Forummer
Posts : 471
| | Subject: Re: ~Item List~ Wed Apr 27, 2011 2:20 am | |
| All the above, and more... | |
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2D4
Critique Extraordinaire
Posts : 3451
| | Subject: Re: ~Item List~ Sat Jun 04, 2011 1:53 am | |
| Hey Distroyer2 I didn't know where to post this so I figured this is a place as good as any. I took a look at your text and made some changes. Your english is really not that bad, you just forget the words like: The , a , and so on, often. I was tired after I didn't sleep last night and had a long day at work, so I think I may have missed a few errors. I hope you can make use of my improvements but the best thing would offcourse be if someone that is actually english makes revisions Ps. I would have sent you this file but I don't have your email - Spoiler:
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RageTester
Chat Owner
Posts : 430
| | Subject: Re: ~Item List~ Sat Jun 04, 2011 5:48 am | |
| - 2D4 wrote:
- Hey Distroyer2 I didn't know where to post this so I figured this is a place as good as any. I took a look at your text and made some changes. Your english is really not that bad, you just forget the words like: The , a , and so on, often. I was tired after I didn't sleep last night and had a long day at work, so I think I may have missed a few errors. I hope you can make use of my improvements but the best thing would offcourse be if someone that is actually english makes revisions
Ps. I would have sent you this file but I don't have your email
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Holy moly, could you pm me improved text lol, image means I have to make changes myself lol  | |
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